my wish is going with you
where ? to the world of dreams thats true
dreams you have been wanted too
i know its not now , but its soon my clue
in that world every thing will be glow
and that glow is going to left you up from youre low
love , caring , sharing from all that towers
and they all are going to be powers
for you , so you dont give up in youre dilema my flowers
and so , please my lovers
dont give up from youre dreams for cowers
because dreaming is not just for this world
its for you both , thats what i have been told
make it ans go is a promise from me to you
beacause i love you more than any thing thats true
Wow.....Bravo, sister ....
I am so impressed that you have this talent of writing expressive poems through which you can convey to the reader what you feel in a simple but rather subtle way.
I would like to know if you don't mind commenting on your poem or not?
Another point, I hope to read more of your poems.
Do You offer coffee here?
Do You offer coffee here?
Why do you ask such a question?
جميل ما كتبتي يا ريحانه .. والاجمل المشاعر التي تحملها ...
ذكرتيني بخواطر كتبتها بالانجليزية وكم كانت فرحتي بها!! أهديتها الى زوجي حيث كانت موجهه اليه .. وانتظرت رده
أتعلمين ما كان رده؟
صلح لي بالاحمر الأخطاء النحوية وعنفني على بعض الاخطاء الاملائية !!
ضريبة الزواج بمدرس!!
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ذكرني هذا بالطبيب الذي قال لخطيبته أعطني يدك، فأعطته يدها على استحياء، فأمسكها دقيقة ثم قال: الحمد لله .. النبض كويس
bless them all
God bless the little children
who were playing on the sand
when the earth began to shift
and rolled water onto land
god bless the ones behind
who have lost others so dear
may thier hearts heal swiftly
throughout the coming years
god bless all who have travelled
to those places unafraid
carry with them youre guidance
to help those in need for aid
god bless all this warlds children
the young the old and in between
to see and feel and care
for the lives seen on their screen
may all those upon this earth
learn from the tsunami tragedy
and move more towards eachh other
to live more in peace and harmony
من عيوني emo (30):
bless them all
God bless the little children
who were playing on the sand
when the earth began to shift
and rolled water onto land
بارك فيهم كلهم (العنوان)
بارك الله في الأطفال الصغار
الذين كانوا يلعبون على الرمال
عندما بدأت الأرض بالإهتزاز (الاهتزاز ليست الترجمة الحرفية لـshift و لكنها قريبة منها)
و قلبت الماء على اليابسة
god bless the ones behind
who have lost others so dear
may thier hearts heal swiftly
throughout the coming years
بارك الله فيمن هم خسروا أناس عزيزين عليهم كثيرا
عسى ان يُشفى قلبهم برقة
خلال السنين القادمة
god bless all who have travelled
to those places unafraid
carry with them youre guidance
to help those in need for aid
بارك الله في كل الذين سافروا
الى تلك المناطق غير خائفين
يحملون معهم توجيهاتكم
ليساعدوا هؤلاء الذين هم بحاجة الى الإسعاف
god bless all this warlds children
the young the old and in between
to see and feel and care
for the lives seen on their screen
بارك الله في كل اطفال هذا العالم
الصغار , الكبار , و الذين هم بين البينين
ليروا و يشعروا و يهتموا
للمشاهد المباشرة على شاشاتهم
bless them all
may all those upon this earth
learn from the tsunami tragedy
and move more towards eachh other
to live more in peace and harmony
عسى كل الذين فوق هذه الارض
ان يكونوا تعلموا من مأساة تسونامي
و يتحركوا اكثر لمسعادة بعضهم بعضا
ليعيشوا بسلام و تناغم
bless them all
God bless the little children
who were playing on the sand
when the earth began to shift
and rolled water onto land
God bless the ones behind
who have lost others so dear
may their hearts heal swiftly
throughout the coming years
God bless all who have traveled
to those places unafraid
carrying with them your guidance
to help those in need for aid
God bless all these world's children
the young, the old, and in between
to see and feel and care
for the live scenes on their screen
may all those upon this earth
learn from the tsunami tragedy
and move more towards each other
to live more in peace and harmony
ساروكة حبيبتي
بعض التصحيح البسيط
وضعت لك خطا تحت ما قمت بتعديله :emoti_282:
القصيدة الجديدة
Sieze the day , for time is passing
Sieze the day , youre days amassing
Youre time to live , and do , and be
Is now for you a mystery
To solve eache day as it unfolds
And watch the tresure it beholds
Now understand youre precious time
Will one day just be over
And understand the time to live
Is now , not under clover
So sieze the moment , sieze the time
Sieze that precious day
And fill youre life with happiness
For this is youre today
ان شاء الله يارب رح تكوني اللي انتي نفسك فيه و اللي فيه مصلحة لإلك
emo (30):